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Hi Brian :p

Replaced the shoutbox with a message board. The site is getting a ton more traffic than I ever expected it to (much of it from Oblimo's site - thanks bud!), and I hope the new forum will encourage people to share their opinions of my story more.

2:10pm

Cleaned up the front page, and added Oblimo to the tidbits page since I took him off the front.

The conclusion to chapter 2 is finally up. It turned out to be a lot longer than I'd planned it, and I still think I omitted some description that I wanted to include, but I'm happy with it. I was worried that if I got too anxious to advance the plot my sex scenes would dry out, but I think I've managed something sufficiently damp.

I have planned Chapter 3: Heart to be shorter and a touch more plot-heavy, but this story has thwarted my every attempt at foresight so who knows. Anyway, I hope you enjoy reading Ch 2 as much as I enjoyed writing it.

5:44pm

Forgot my horizontal lines. I figure these are like a crutch used by poor web designers, of which I am one.

I realized today that I accidentally named the ruined city in our story after the human king from warcraft. I'm really quite bad at making up names. Originally I didn't want to name it at all, but in order to include some dialogue I had planned I needed to. Oh well, live and learn.

Break is over and the rest of chapter 2 should be coming along soonish.

Thanks tons for the shoutboard posts guys! I'm going to see if I can swing something with better than a 200 character limit, once I'm not feeling lazy.

As for the story, I'm going to let what I have "gel" for a bit (heh) so I can turn a fresh eye to the rest of chapter 2. Some surprises coming. We're talkin, M. Night Shyamalamadingdong... well, maybe not that bad.

9:00am

Oh, that's how that works...

Added the Sources, Tidbits, Info section. It explains some story related details, and if you deign to investigate some of the things therein, it may enhance your pathos regarding the story.

Chapter 2: Mate, is coming soon. I promise. seriously.

9:00am

I told you it was coming soon. This is not all of chapter 2, but I finished what I think is a pretty sweet sex scene and felt compelled to share. We also learn a little more about Ty. I kinda did this on an early morning spree, so some of the spelling and grammar may be touch and go

The shoutbox is broken and I don't know why, and that is the truth.

9:00pm

Fixed zee shoutbox. It did not enjoy being on the same page as another table... for some reason. whatev. Feel free to leave comments, I like to hear what people think of my writing, for better or worse.

Made less ugly. I'm getting a little better at this, heh. Keep in mind that this has been a 3 hour, self-taught crash course in the very, very basics of HTML and this pbwiki code they have here :p

PBWiki is still removing carriage returns, seemingly at random. I do not know why.

4:16am

Phew, now that that is out of the way, welcome to my web publishing debut and flimsy vehicle for my googirl story, currently in development. As a little kid, when such things seem perfectly rational, slime girls were one of my most predominant sexual fantasies. I forgot them as I grew up, but about a month ago a friend introduced me to 4chan and from there I found 7898chan, and from there I found Oblimo's marvelous story. It reminded me vividly of my tenderness for amorphous girls. I then hit a game-winning home run, defused the bomb, blew up the asteroid, and other such things. Not really, I just decided to write my own story.

I guess you could technically refer to me as a "seasoned" fiction writer; I've written a couple short stories that were met reasonably well by my readers, but this will be my first try at erotic fiction. The result, I think, isn't as "wet" as some of the better ones, but I think I've got a pretty enjoyable story going with enough fun parts to keep your elbows from getting bored.

I'm not happy with all of it, but a wise man once told me "don't let perfectionism slow you down!" and I've taken it to heart. Essentially, the parts you won't like are the result of my unfamiliarty to the medium, and the parts you will like are the result of my talents as a writer, whatever those parts may be.

This first installment is about two-thirds of what I consider to be finalized, which means I've written it and I'm reasonably certain that I won't change it. I have the story mapped out in it's entirety, it's just a matter of fleshing it out, which really is the tricky part. I have to admit, though, that this story has, for lack of a better word, raped me, and I find myself spending very large amounts of my time on it seemingly without my consent.

Some of the dialogue doesn't make sense right now. That's by design, you'll find out what it's about later. Also, you may notice that I have a "Prologue" listed, followed only by song lyrics. That is also by design. If you don't yet own the album "Octovarium" by Dream Theater and you enjoy good music (don't laugh, some people don't) I strongly urge you to head out and pick it up. You can skip my ersatz prologue if you like, but if you do read it (or better yet, listen to the song) you'll think back later on in the story and go "Oh yeaaah"

I have another song just waiting to be the epilogue, too :p

Enjoy, criticize, let me know what you think.